PancakePocket's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crime Scene]

I love the shot murdered.. murdered part lol!

DamjanRI responds:

thanks :)

[Mayhem]

Your mixing and mastering could use some work, and some parts are really messy, but you did a good job!

Sylux03 responds:

Omg? Is it really messy? Hmmm. I could fix that. Thanks for your thoughts! :)

[Shimmer]

The melody is great!

Lubloom responds:

Thank you :)

[arcadia 2nd version]

I saw your post on Newgrounds - http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1424663

You are doing great with your music, but there are some things you could improve on!

1. Mastering and Mixing, It helps you remove the annoying sounds and really helps boost your music skills
2. Originality, This really sounds like a normal basic Video Game track, try to make something that will shock your viewers

These things will help you improve!

LLCALIREP responds:

Thank you so very much for your honesty!!! I will keep going and try to do my best always!:)

[[DJKB] Galactic Desert]

Don't worry about the fanbase at NewGrounds, Only the best of the best really gets fans here because NewGrounds is really picky on what is good and what is bad! Anyway, about the song, It does get really boring at some parts and it repeats too much, also, some parts don't really go with one another, making the song feel really messy and boring, which I am sure it was not intended. You should add more power with your synths and melodies so it does not feel faded and distant in the song! :)

AlmightyDJKB responds:

Thank you for the advice but the song was meant to be faded and distant

[Rat In the Attic (Mix 2)]

It is really good, but the clicking noise at the beginning of the song is really useless and does not fit with the song at all

verbicidemusic responds:

Funny thing about that noise, it only appeared once I had exported the track, otherwise that wasnt a concious choice lol. Weird exportation anomalies like that seem to happen often with my DAW and I dont know how to prevent them lol Glad you enjoyed it though.

[Argon]

I like this! This is really good, Great Job!

Jatmoz responds:

Thank you! I'm grateful that you liked it!